Beta Reader Feedback

First feedback on The Observer Series – World of Fives

  • They want more!.
  • Needs not to end when it did…
  • One section has too many new characters
  • Some of my future new words need more explanation

Just the feedback I want, and I can make the subtle changes.  I need to ensure that the back story exists both on the web site and in the book


The World of Fives